IELTS WRITING TASK 2 BAND 9 ESSAYS (30 essays)Essay number 1
Some sports are extremely dangerous but many
people still like them very much. Why do people take part in dangerous sports?
Give some suggestions on how to deal with these dangers.
In recent years we have seen a considerable rise in
dangerous or extreme sports. This essay shall discuss some of the main reasons
why people engage in such sports and suggest ways in which some risks involved
in such sports can be reduced.
The main reason why people go for dangerous sports is that
they get the thrill out of them. They like taking risks. They like to challenge
their abilities and potentials. They feel a sense of satisfaction when they
come face to face with fears while bungee jumping, rock climbing and so on. In
addition, going through a dangerous experience gives them courage and
confidence to face the hurdles of their daily life.
Another reason for pursuing such sports is that there is a
lot of fame and money involved in them. They get attention by doing stunts on
motorcycles and jumping from tall buildings. They make headlines in newspapers
and TV News Channels. They feel great when their name comes in the Guinness
Book of World Records. Once they get famous they get a lot of money also. For
instance, many businesses hire them to endorse their products. They also get
jobs on the basis of such skills.
Many steps can be taken to reduce the risks are that
involved. Firstly, these sports should be done under strict supervision. All
safety precautions should be taken. Such sports should be performed after
sufficient training and under supervision of adults. Sport companies which
cater to such sports should require a license for providing such training. Some
people suggest banning some sports. However, I do not believe that banning is a
good solution. We all know that forbidden fruits taste sweeter and people will
do such sports in hiding which would increase the risks involved.
To put it in a nutshell, I pen down saying that, people do
such sports for fun, for money and for fame. However, such sports should be
performed after sufficient training from licensed companies and under some
supervision.
Essay number 2
People try new dangerous sports such as sky-diving
or rock climbing. Should such sports be banned?
In recent years we have seen a considerable rise in
dangerous or extreme sports. Although I do not support an outright ban on such
sports, I do feel that the government should regulate such sports so that they
are played under supervision which will minimize the risks.
It is irrefutable that dangerous or extreme sports can
cause injury or even death to the individuals. However, banning such sports is
not the answer. Instead, the government should ensure that the companies or
centres which provide the facilities for such sports should meet the required,
legal safety standards. Another argument against banning is that then people
would play them in hiding and then they would be even more risky. After all we
all know that forbidden fruits taste sweeter.
Furthermore, if government bans such sports, it could be
viewed as an infringement of the rights. Those who choose to participate in
these sports know the consequences. They know very well what is good or bad for
them. They argue that if such sports are banned, then all those other things
that are harmful for individuals should be banned like smoking, drinking and
eating fast foods.What is more, those sportsmen who excel in such sports bring
name and fame to their country. They break records set by others and when they
do so, the name of their country shines in the whole world.
To put it in a nutshell, I pen down saying that, such
sports should be performed after sufficient training and under supervision of
adults. Dangerous sport companies should require a license for providing such
training. To lay a ban on such sports is not the answer.
Essay Number 3
When families have a meal together it is
considered social activity. Do you think eating together is important to people
in your country?
It is irrefutable that eating together is a social
activity. Sharing dinner together gives everyone a sense of identity. It can
help ease day-to-day conflicts, as well as establish traditions and memories
that can last a lifetime.
The first and foremost advantage of eating together is
that it creates a sense of belonging. Conversations during the meal provide
opportunities for the family to bond and learn from one another. It’s a chance
to share information and news of the day, as well as give extra attention to
your children and teens. Family meals foster warmth, security and love, as well
as feelings of belonging. It can be a unifying experience for all.Secondly,
family mealtime is the perfect opportunity to teach appropriate table manners,
etiquette, and social skills. Parents can be perfect role models in this and
children learn by following them. What is more, meals prepared and eaten at
home are usually more nutritious and healthy. They contain more fruits,
vegetables, and dairy products along with additional nutrients such as fiber,
calcium, vitamins A and C, and folate.
Furthermore, research shows that frequent family dinners
(five or more a week), are associated with lower rates of smoking, drinking,
and illegal drug use in pre-teens and teenagers when compared to families that
eat together two or fewer times per week. To add to it, children do better in
school when they eat more meals with their parents and family. In my country
most people do value shared mealtime. However, the fast paced life and
influence of the global culture is taking some away from this custom.
Fortunately, some recent studies have shown that even in the developed
countries people are realizing the importance of family meals and are
downshifting. It is indeed time to bring the "family" back to the
dinner table.
To put it in a nutshell, I pen down saying that eating
together is definitely an important social activity. That it why it has been
said that, ‘The family that eats together stays together’.
Essay Number 4
Some people say that parents have the most
important role in a child’s development. However, others argue that other
things like television or friends have the most significant influence. Discuss
both views and give your own opinion.
Human development is a complex interplay of many factors.
Some individuals are of the opinion that parents have the most significant role
in a child’s development whereas others opine that friends and other
environmental factors such as TV have a more important role. It is necessary to
look at both arguments before forming an opinion.
Parents have direct interactions with the children. They
provide a sense of identification to the child. These have their greatest
effect on intellectual development and character traits. They also play a very
important role in the socializing process of the child. Right from the bed time
stories to the behavioral habits parents play a very important role in making a
child a responsible citizen. They know their child’s temperament better than
anyone else. They can provide critical input better than anyone else. That is
why it is believed by some that parents have the strongest role in a child’s
development.
Friends, on the other hand, are important in order to help
children grow emotionally and socially. Children find out who they are by
comparing themselves to others. They learn about attitude, character and
personality. Building good relationships boosts a child’s self esteem and they
find comfort in those friendships when things get tough such as losing a pet or
facing family problems. Therefore, friendships are essential to assure children
develop a healthy psyche. When kids are surrounded by friends or have one close
friend, they have better self esteem, feel a sense of well being and experience
fewer social problems.
Television is also one of the most prevalent media
influences in kids' lives. How much impact TV has on children depends on many
factors: how much they watch, their age and personality, whether they watch
alone or with adults, and whether their parents talk with them about what they
see on TV.
In my opinion, we cannot generalize as to what has more
significance. In the early years family generally has more impact but in
adolescence peers and TV may impact more. It appears that the power of the peer
group becomes more important when the family relationships are not close or
supportive. For example, if the parents work extra jobs and are largely
unavailable, their children may turn to their peer group for emotional support.
To put it in a nutshell, I pen down saying that behavior
is affected by a complex interaction of many different factors such as parents,
peers and environment. All these are inextricably linked in the development of
children. There is individual variation and therefore it is difficult to
generalize which factor plays the most significant role.
Essay Number 5
Wild animals have no place in the 21st century,
and the protection is a waste of resources. To what extent do you agree or
disagree?
I disagree with the notion that wild animals are redundant
in the current century and therefore we need not waste our precious resources
in protecting them. I believe that the conservation of these species should be
our top priority as they are our most precious resources. In the following
paragraphs I shall put forth my arguments to support my views.
The most important reason for saving wild animals is that
they are part of our ecosystem. Every species of wildlife plays a role to
maintain the balance of life on Earth. Thus, the loss of any species can affect
us directly or indirectly. Let us consider species to be like a brick in the
foundation of a building. We can probably lose one or two or a dozen bricks and
still have a standing house. But by the time we have lost 20 per cent of
species, we are going to destabilize the entire structure. That's the way
ecosystems work.
Secondly, wild animals provide many valuable substances
such as medicine and fur. The horn of the rhinoceros has medicinal value and
the fur of the mink is very valuable. The recreational viewing of animals at
zoos is also a source of revenue. Thus, the financial value of wild species is
important to the economies of many nations.
Finally, wild animals have aesthetic appeal. They are
beautiful creatures of nature and are a part of our bio-diversity. Their
beautiful and mysterious life has enchanted mankind since the dawn of
evolution. Scientists have been awed by observing their behavior. Such study
has helped scientists understand how the human body functions and why people
behave as they do. Scientists have also gained medical knowledge by studying
the effect of many drugs on these animals.
In conclusion, the protection of wild animals in the 21st
century is by no means a waste of resources. In fact it should be the most
important global priority today. I pen down by a quotation – “Scientists know
we must protect species because they are working parts of our life-support
system”.
Essay Number 6
Some people claim that there are more
disadvantages of the car than its advantages. Do you agree or disagree?
Someone has rightly said that – “The car has become an
article of dress without which we feel uncertain, unclad, and incomplete”. In
my opinion, the advantages of the car outstrip its disadvantages.
There are many advantages of car. The most important
advantage is that it has given people freedom of movement. The ease of
transportation which a car brings is more than any other form of
transportation. For instance, you can go from destination to destination and no
time is wasted waiting for the bus or train. Therefore, time and distance are
not a barrier any more. What is more, families can go out together. This
becomes especially helpful when there are elderly or the disabled and sick
members in the family.
Furthermore, the automobile industry provides jobs to
millions of workers. Filling stations, restaurants, and other businesses that
serve automobile travelers are of major importance to a country’s economy. In
addition, many developing nations have begun making automobiles to boost their
economy. That is why India has promoted many automobile manufacturing
industries such as Tata and Mahindra.
On the other hand the disadvantages of the car cannot be
overlooked. The increase in pollution, traffic jams and accidents are the
natural sequelae to the burgeoning population of cars. Moreover, our
overdependence on cars can lead to decrease in practices such as walking and
cycling and this has led to a number of diseases such as obesity.
On balance, the advantages to people’s lives and the
economic impact created by the car definitely outweigh the disadvantages.
However, we must know when and how-much to use the car so that we can minimize
the demerits to some extent.
Essay Number 7
Tobacco is a kind of drug. People have been free
to use it. Some people think that it should be illegal to use it comparing with
other drugs. To what extent do you agree or disagree? What is your opinion?
(Against banning)
Every year, thousands of people worldwide die from both
smoking tobacco and involuntarily breathing it in. Despite this, I do not agree
that it should be made illegal. However, I also believe that there should be a
regulation on its use, considering its harms to health. In the following
paragraphs, I shall put forth my arguments to support my views.
It is irrefutable that tobacco products, especially
cigarettes, could cause lung cancer, heart disease, and other illnesses. Drug
abuse also has many potentially harmful effects not only on individuals but
also on family, friends, work and society. Frequent drug users may turn to
crime to meet the increasing expense for their habit. Continued drug use may
cause personality changes. Some users lose interest in school or work, or have
difficulty meeting the responsibilities of a job or family.
Nonetheless, it costs society far more to prohibit a drug
than it does to regulate it. And I’m not talking about just money. Prohibition
creates organized crime, and with it you get street wars, and police
corruption. With more violence comes more police, and that means more cost.
Regulation on the other hand, works quite well. The government should decide
who gets to make it, who sells it, and who it is sold to. There should be
controls on tobacco regarding potency, packaging, advertising, and a lot of
other things. This is definitely better than banning a drug which leads to
organized crime.
Moreover, tobacco has long been a source of money for the
governments in many countries. This income comes from taxes on the manufactured
products. Excise taxes also come from tobacco that arrives from other
countries. Finally, I believe that it is better to educate people about the
harms of tobacco. This approach has worked better in many countries and there
has been a reduction in the sale of tobacco products.
To put it in a nutshell, I pen down saying that, banning tobacco
is not a good idea. Drug prohibition has been the most failed social policy and
banning tobacco is a step backwards. However, there should be control on the
manufacturing and sale of tobacco.
Essay Number 8
Tobacco is a kind of drug. People have been free
to use it. Some people think that it should be illegal to use it comparing with
other drugs. To what extent do you agree or disagree? What is your opinion?
(For banning)
Every year, thousands of people worldwide die from both
smoking tobacco and involuntarily breathing it in. Therefore, I agree that it
should be made illegal considering its harms to health. In the following
paragraphs, I shall put forth my arguments to support my views.
It is irrefutable that tobacco products, especially
cigarettes, could cause lung cancer, heart disease, and other illnesses.
Smoking tobacco kills more than alcohol, drug abuse, car crashes, murders,
suicides, and fires combined. World-wide some 3 million people die from smoking
each year, 1 every 10 seconds. Smokers are more than 20 times more likely to
develop lung cancer than non-smokers, and smoking can lead to a host of other
health problems, including emphysema and heart disease.
The detrimental effects of cigarette smoke are not just on
the active smoker, but also on the passive smoker. Smoking tobacco not only
gives the smoker a high chance of an early grave it gives those around him/her
the same chances due to second hand smoke. What is more, a child born to a
woman who has actively or passively smoked during pregnancy has chances of
developing congenital defects.Drug abuse also has many potentially harmful effects not
only on individuals but also on family, friends, work and society. Frequent
drug users may turn to crime to meet the increasing expense for their habit.
Continued drug use may cause personality changes. Some users lose interest in
school or work, or have difficulty meeting the responsibilities of a job or
family.
To put it in a nutshell, I pen down saying that, one of
the main responsibilities of any government is to ensure the safety of its
population, that is why taking tobacco should be made illegal.
Essay Number 9
Some people say that the government should not put
money on building theatres and sports stadiums. They should spend more money on
medical care and education. Do you agree or disagree?
It is a highly debatable issue whether the government
should spend money on medicine and education rather than on theatres and sports
stadiums. In my opinion, all these things are important for the people and
therefore, the government should allocate equal resources for both.
Basic medical care is very important for the general
public. If people are healthy, there will be more productivity of work and the
country will prosper as a whole. There are many people who live below the
poverty line and it is the government’s responsibility that they should receive
medical aid whenever needed. There are also the elderly who have paid taxes
throughout their working life and now need good medical care. Good education
facilities are also the duty of the government. Today, there are a number of
children from deprived backgrounds who get substandard education. They would
definitely require a high quality of education if they are to succeed in later
life. What is more, an educated society has less crime and violence and the
country gets good recognition in the whole world if its people are educated.
On the other hand, theatres and sports stadiums are
equally essential for people. Art and entertainment is also a basic human need.
Theatrical shows provide entertainment and at the same time preserve our
culture and tradition. Our artists earn name and fame for our country. Sports
stadiums, similarly, attract millions of spectators to watch matches every
year. Many more millions watch games on television, read about them in
newspapers, and discuss them with their friends. Therefore, we cannot say that
these are unnecessary expenditures and therefore the government should ignore
them.
To put it in a nutshell, I pen down saying that, medicine
and education are needs that we recognize, but theatrical or sports events are
also basic needs. Therefore governments should allocate resources for both
these things.
Essay Number 10
Some people think that children should learn how to
compete, but others think that children should be taught to cooperate to become
more useful adults.
Express some reasons for both views and give your
own opinions.
It is a highly debatable issue whether children should
learn to compete or co-operate in order to become productive citizens of
society. In my opinion, both competition and cooperation are necessary virtues
of life and children should learn both. What is more important is to teach
children where they need to compete and where they need to cooperate. Competition is very important in life. Children can be
taught to compete when they prepare for the exams or when they play solo sports
like athletics. They have to learn to compete to excel in studies or win a race
or any athletic event. This virtue comes handy in adult life. For example, when
they do any business, they have to compete with other businessmen to succeed in
business. Definitely, successful businessmen are useful adults in society.
On the other hand, there are many fields where cooperation
is needed. Children can be taught this virtue in the sports field when they
play team sports like cricket and hockey. They can also be taught cooperation
when teachers give them group assignments in studies. This virtue also makes
them useful adults because they have to cooperate in many fields of life. For
instance, when they work as scientists to research the treatment of diseases
like cancers and AIDS then it can never be a one-man show. It has to be a joint
effort. Software developers also have to work as a team to bring benefits to
all of us who use technology nowadays.
There are also situations where both competition and
cooperation are needed simultaneously. For example, when children do team
sports, they learn to cooperate with their team members and at the same time
they learn to compete with the opposite team. Similarly, in adult life they
have to learn to cooperate with their country-men to compete with those of
other countries. We all know that today’s era is highly competitive and the big
planet Earth has shrunk to a global village. For example, Indian auto
industries have merged to compete with the German and Japanese industries. So,
competition and cooperation go hand in hand.
To put it in a nutshell, I pen down saying that, it is
clear that children should be taught both – to compete as well as cooperate and
more importantly where in life they have to apply these attributes.
Essay Number 11
The world would be a much poorer place without
colour. To what extent would you agree or disagree.
Colours are one of the greatest blessings that god has
bestowed upon people in the world. Have you ever thought what it would be like
to live in a world without colour. Forget everything for a moment and start
using your imagination. Try to think how you would feel if people, cats, dogs,
birds, butterflies and fruits had no colour at all. You would never want to
live in such a world. Would you?
Colours have a crucial role in man’s communication with
the outside world and in the proper functioning of his memory. Hearing or touch
alone, are not enough to define objects. How can we define colourless flowers
placed on a colourless table
Human eye can recognise millions of colours. Identifying
objects and our surroundings are not the only benefits of a diversity of
colours. Colours also give us a lot of pleasure. The beautiful blue sky, the
blood red sunset or a rainbow after a rainfall do add happiness to our lives.
The colours of nature have been arranged so as to appeal to the human soul.
Nowadays some prisons are painted pink and green to put prisoners in a better
mood.
Colours hold a special significance in our culture also.
In some parts of the world white is worn for weddings and black for funerals.
In other parts white is the colour of mourning. Red is the symbol of love. Red
also represents danger. Blood is red; fire engines are red and traffic signals
are also red. Colours also reflect the personality of a person. The colour of
your clothes can have a considerable impact on how you are perceived. Light colour
reflects a sober personality. Colours also have been used as a treatment of
some mental disorders.
To put it in a nutshell, I can say that the world would
definitely be a much poorer place without colour. They add life and beauty to
our world.
Essay Number 12
The computers are widely used in education and
some people think that teachers do not play an important role in the classroom.
To what extent do you agree?
It is irrefutable that computers have become an
indispensable part of education but I disagree that teachers do not play a
significant role in the classroom. I believe that no amount of technology can
ever replace the teacher. In the following paragraphs, I intend to support my
views with my arguments.
It is an undeniable fact that teachers can never lose
their importance. In learning and practice of more complex ideas, the computer
is not adequate. It can tell if the answer is right or wrong but it cannot tell
where the student went wrong. Tasks involving reasoning cannot be taught using computers.
Moreover, teachers add their own knowledge gained through experience to that of
books and other resources. Furthermore, teachers can stimulate interest and it
is an undeniable fact that interested stimulated people tend to learn more.
They can keep students focused on study. A student studying by himself may get
bored and stop studying. Teachers can provide a faster and simpler way to
present information to the students. They can come down to the level of a
student and so are definitely better than computers. What is more, teachers are
role models for students. They are scholars in action. They not only teach
academic subjects, but also many social skills.
On the other hand, it is also true that the use of
computers in today’s classrooms is also the need of the day. Teachers should
use computers to add innovation to their teaching methods. Power point
presentations can make even the dull and boring subjects seem interesting. So
computers and teachers should not be treated as rivals to each other. They
should play a complementary role so that today’s classrooms become very
interesting and our children can compete with other children of this global
village.
To put it in a nutshell, I can say that, no doubt
computers are being used in the classrooms but they can never replace the
teacher.
Essay Number 13
Some people think that charity organizations
should only offer help to people of their own country. But others believe that
these organizations should give aid to people in great need wherever they live.
Discuss both views and give your opinion.
“To have enough to share; to know the joy of giving; to
thrill with all the sweets of life - is living”. Helping others is a very
virtuous thing. Charities help in basically two ways. One is by offering
support to people in their own country, and the second is by helping the needy
irrespective of their country. In this essay I intend to delve into the
benefits of both approaches.
There are many advantages if charities help their own
country’s people. Firstly, these organisations remain directly in touch with
the needy. They can see how the money or other the other resources provided by
them are being used. It has been well said that charity begins at home. What is
more, domestic charities target problems specific to their home country, for
instance the Help Age India is an Indian charity providing help for the aged in
India.
There are also many advantages if these organisations help
the needy in any corner of the world. In such cases these organisations work on
a larger platform and provide help for global issues. A larger platform is a
must if one has a lot to offer in charity. Help activities can be better spread
through a larger network. Help need not be always in the form of money. It can
be in the form of services also. For example, these organisations can provide
doctors and teachers who volunteer to provide medical aid and also teach in the
under-developed nations.
Help in any form is good. The condition of one’s country
could influence the way of helping. In a developed country, where even the
poorest of the poor has the basic amenities of life, it would be better to help
in any part of the world where people need help. But, in the case of a
developing or underdeveloped country it would be better to help those around
you.
To put it in a nutshell, I pen down saying that the
purpose of charity organizations is to help people in need and it does not
matter where this help goes. If people of the home country need help then it
would certainly be advisable to help those around you first.
Essay Number 14
9th October AC - IELTS essay -
India
History tells that people have often thought about
creating an ideal society, but most of the times fail in making this happen.
What is your opinion about an ideal society? How can we create an ideal
society?
If we look at history, it is clear that since time
immemorial, people have always wanted to create an ideal society but have been
unsuccessful. In the following essay, I intend to discuss what makes an ideal
society and how we can create one.
An ideal society is a society where needs of the people
regardless of their race, religion or wealth would be met. Many great thinkers,
such as Plato, Thomas More and Dr. Martin Luther King Jr. have offered their
opinions on this to the public over the years. However, these dreams failed
because different people have different ideals about a perfect society. To make
it happen, either the ideals of all the people have to be fulfilled, or all the
people would have to have the same ones.
Imagine a society with no crime, no terrorism, no warfare,
no conflicts of cultures, no racism, no gender discrimination, no poisoned
tongues, no killing, no lying, no stealing, no adultery and no excuses. Such a
society can never exist. It would be wrong even to think of one. A perfect
society needs some kind of social inequality, or as I call it, a distinction in
ability. Those in the higher strata of society would be there because of their
superior abilities and have greater responsibilities and, therefore, a higher
social standing. An ideal society should have some struggle. If you had no
struggle in life would you be happy? No, because that takes all the fun and
enjoyment out of the difficulty, the losing, the failures, and the overcoming,
the victory, the success.
There are many ways in which we can make an ideal society.
First of all, there must be democracy and a strong government which has the
ability to rule over the country. It should try to make the citizens life
better by making better social and financial conditions to live. There should
be no corruption in the government. Finally, I believe, one of the most
necessary things of ideal society is freedom. No people and no society are
happy and ideal when they are not free. However, we must remember that – ‘One’s
freedom ends there where other’s starts’. If we will feel free and do not
disturb others freedom we will have ideal society. An ideal society would allow
complete freedom to everybody and complete individuality.
To sum up, I pen down saying that, a perfect society is
difficult to attain as everyone has different concepts of an ideal society.
However, if we all respect our freedom and in doing so know our limitations, so
that others can enjoy their freedom then it can be called an ideal society.
Essay Number 15
14th October essay (AC)- India
Some people believe that tourists should accept
social and environmental responsibility while others believe that tourists
should not accept any responsibility at all. To what extent do you agree or
disagree?
It is irrefutable that tourism industry has become the
backbone of many economies of the world. No wonder all countries are opening
their doors to tourists. The negative social and environmental impacts of
tourism have led many to suggest that tourists should accept responsibility for
this. I definitely agree with this notion.
Eco-tourism, sustainable-tourism, responsible-tourism,
modern-tourism or whatever name you may like to give it, is the need of the
hour. In the following paragraphs, I intend to put forth my arguments to
support my view.The most important reason why tourists should be responsible is
that many tourist destinations are endangered now because of the litter and
pollution spread by the tourists. For example, the Sukhna Lake in Chandigarh,
which is a popular tourist spot, once got so badly damaged by the wrappers and
plastic bottles which tourists threw that no boating could be done there and it
smelled so bad that people stopped going there. It took months to get it
cleaned up and restore tourism there. The local people and the governments
cannot handle such situation effectively unless the tourists themselves lend a
hand by being careful.
Secondly, there is over-consumption of resources by
tourists such as of water and fuel and this is incompatible with sustainable
development. Tourist demand for resources such as water and food may also
compete with the needs of local people and may lead to injustice with the
locals. For example, in Shimla, a popular hill station, tourists stay in five
star accommodations and take two showers a day where as the people outside are
short of drinking water. To add to it many tourism activities such as skiing,
boating, motorised water-sports, and trekking represent a stress to fragile
ecosystems. Who will welcome the tourists to those places if tourists don’t
accept responsibility? Instead of five star accommodations, they could live
with the locals and be satisfied with one shower a day.
Finally, if tourists do not respect the local people’s
culture and environment, then the natives would be hostile towards them and the
whole purpose of tourism would be lost. For example, in our religious places,
it is customary to cover our head and take off our shoes. If tourists don’t do
so they would not be welcome by our people there. So, the onus is on the
tourist to know beforehand the norms of the place and fortunately nowadays,
everything is available on the net or one can get all information from the tour
operators.
Responsible tourism is everyone's responsibility. The well
being of the destination is not only the responsibility of the tourism sector -
it is also the responsibility of the tourist. That is why it has rightly been
said that – ‘ A good tourist is one who leaves behind nothing, but footprints;
and takes away nothing, but photographs.
Essay Number 16
30-10-2010 India AC
Some languages are increasingly spoken in
different countries, while the usage of others is rapidly declining. Is this a
positive or a negative development?
Today, we do not belong to a big planet called Earth. We
are part of a global village and there is more interaction among people of
different parts of the globe than ever before. Therefore, some languages are
being spoken more and the use of a few languages is declining. This is both – a
negative as well as a positive development.
On the positive side, the increasing use of some languages
is easing communication among people. For example, English is now spoken in
more than 86 countries of the world and French in around 33 countries. In fact
English has become the lingua franca in many parts of the world. Because of
this people do not face difficulty when they travel from one country to the
other. What is more, if people speak the same language then they also find it
easy to do business with each other. Global trade is based on good
communication. We all know that lack of communication gives rise to many
misunderstandings. Businesses cannot flourish if for every small communication
an interpreter is required. Nowadays, we belong to a 24/7 society. Many
multinational companies have opened in different parts of the world. The rich
nations who own these MNCs provide jobs to millions of people worldwide.
Naturally, a person who knows their language is better placed in these
companies. The pay package is also better and chances to work abroad also go
up. In a way the widespread use of a few languages also helps to decrease the
gap between the rich and the poor.
On the downside, the decline in use of some languages is
also something to be concerned about. It is a well known fact that language and
culture are inter-related. If languages die out then culture also dies out. We
all enjoy life on this planet because of its diversity. If diversity decreases,
then boredom sets in and the earth becomes a dull and boring place to live in.
To put it in a nutshell, I pen down saying that, the
increase in use of a few languages and the decline of others is both a positive
as well as a negative development. This situation is an inevitable sequel of
globalization. If the governments take steps to protect the endangered
languages, then the negative effects can be minimized.
Essay Number 17
These days many people leave their country to work abroad
and take their family with them. Do you think benefits of this outweigh
disadvantages in terms of family development?
The opportunities to work abroad are more today than they
have ever been in the history of mankind. The big planet Earth has become a
small global village and sovereign barriers seem to have disappeared. While
working in a foreign country, some individuals take their family with them.
This situation has both merits as well as demerits but definitely the merits
outweigh the demerits.
There are many obvious benefits of going abroad to work
along with family. To begin with, individuals have more bonding with family.
The family relationship would not be weakened by distance. Some couples finally
end up in divorce, as one or both of them cannot endure the long-term
separation. Secondly, many people feel homesick and lonely and therefore cannot
adjust in the foreign country and return home thereby missing the golden
opportunity of working abroad.
The most important point is that children, especially who
are in young ages, need the care from both parents. Childhood is a crucial
phase of life and comes only once. If children are deprived of one parents love
it may have a considerable impact on their psyche. Therefore, working abroad
with family can provide complete love and care to the children. On the other
hand, there are some problems of working abroad with families. To begin with,
living with family members abroad means more expenses. A single person can
share room with someone in the initial stages but a complete family needs a
proper house. What is more, all the members face stress of adaptation to alien
surroundings. Parents themselves feel culture shock and therefore cannot help
their children.
To put it in a nutshell, I pen down saying that, there are
both advantages and disadvantages in any choice of this issue. Personally, I
believe that people should decide according to their specific circumstances. If
there are financial constraints, then it is better to go alone initially.
However, the family should be called as early as possible.
Essay Number 18
Everyone should stay in school until the age of
eighteen. To what extent do you agree or disagree?
In many countries, school attendance is mandatory for all
children up to a specific age. In India this is 14 years of age. In the UK and
many other countries it is 16, although the UK government now has plans to
raise the school leaving age to 18. I agree that children should be in school
till the age of 18. In the following paragraphs, I intend to put forth my
arguments to support my views.
The most important reason for raising the school leaving
age to 18 is that, the age of 14-18 is the most impressionable age of a child’s
life. During this period of adolescence, the children undergo physical and
hormonal changes because of which they are under a lot of pressure. Therefore,
lengthening compulsory schooling helps protect childhood. While at school
students will be protected from some of the pressures in life. They have the
rest of adulthood to work, make budgets balance and make choices. Providing
them with space to grow for as long as possible can make them better prepared
for adult life.
Secondly, more education provides the opportunity to
acquire more skills and therefore more options. It has been shown many times
that those with more education find it easier to find work and that they are
more likely to find that work satisfying. What is more, raising the
school-leaving age is a crucial investment in society's future. Doing so
increases the economic potential of the future workforce, and so will bring
increased tax revenues in the long term.
However, the opponents claim that extending the period of
compulsory education requires a huge investment in teachers, books and new
school buildings which would be very expensive. They also say that many
families need their children to make an economic contribution to the family
income and working early can help these families to survive. Finally, just
being in school does not guarantee that a student is learning. Unwilling
students become disruptive and damage the education of others in their class.
To put it in a nutshell, I pen down saying that, as every
garden has weeds, similarly compulsory schooling also has some drawbacks.
However, these drawbacks are nothing as compared to the vast benefits this
approach would bring and the cost needed to implement would be negligible if
compared to the huge economic potential of the future workforce. Therefore, I
believe that everyone should stay in school until the age of eighteen.
Essay Number 19
Mothers generally stay home to take care of their children
after pregnancy. Do you support the opinion that these mothers should be
compensated by the government?
I definitely agree with the notion that mothers, who stay
at home to look after their children after pregnancy should be compensated by
the government. In the following paragraphs I intend to put forth my arguments
to support my views.
My major argument is that the future of the world rests
largely in the hands of the generation we are rearing. Once a child is born, it
becomes national property. Mothers are the front line child care providers and
therefore, if they are supported by the government they can do their job
better. This help can be in the form of a paid maternity leave. In most Indian
homes the mother’s salary is necessary to support the family. So, if the mother
does not get a paid maternity leave, then she has to go back to job earlier and
this affects the childcare. Nurseries fail to provide the one-to-one
interaction children need.
Secondly, a woman has to go with very stressful time
physically, emotionally, and financially during pregnancy period. There is
extra financial burden related to her prenatal care, preparing for a new baby,
and then the care of the baby. Therefore, government help can ease their burden
and they can look after their babies nicely. Finally, if women are supported by
the government, they can look after their health. Health as such involves
several factors. It is not simply being free from diseases. So, proper
education, enough employment opportunities, food security and affordable
medical care are some of the contributory factors that the government can
provide to make women healthy. Needless to say, there should be enough
provision for all these in a society that expects to be healthy today and tomorrow.
It is well known that women play the most crucial role in managing the health
of the family. And healthy families contribute greatly to social welfare.
The opponents, however, claim that it is a personal choice
to have a baby. So, why should there be government support for women who stay
at home to look after their children? They have a point, but I still feel that
women need the aid considering the physical, emotional, and financial stress
they face.
To put it in a nutshell, I pen down saying that, women
should be supported by the government after delivery to look after the baby and
themselves. This can contribute a lot to social welfare.
Essay Number 20
Some people think that paying taxes is enough to
contribute to the society. Others argue that being a citizen involves more
responsibilities. Discuss, what is your opinion?
A good citizen is a blessing to society. Some people opine
that paying taxes is enough contribution towards the society whereas others
believe that a good citizen has a lot more responsibilities than just paying
taxes. I personally go with the latter view. In the following paragraphs I
intend to enumerate the responsibilities of a good citizen.
It is irrefutable that paying all the taxes and in a
timely manner is one of the major responsibilities of a citizen. It is
necessary to pay taxes because the money that is paid by citizens is used for
constructive purposes, like building and maintaining roads, schools, fire
protection, defence services etc. The different types of taxes to be paid by
citizens are income tax, excise tax, property tax, sales tax etc. Most people
try to avoid taxes, but to have the freedoms that we have, we must fund our
government agencies. All taxes exist to make our lives better. To enjoy our
comparatively trouble free lives, we must pay taxes.
However, there are many other obligations which a good
citizen must fulfil. To begin with, voting in elections is very important. When
citizens fail to vote or have political opinions, they allow vested interests
to have their way. Secondly, they must obey law and order. If all citizens are
law abiding, then the whole nation would be a paradise on Earth. It is also the responsibility of a good
citizen to provide public service to the government. This means volunteering for
various agencies and charities. Finally, it is a citizen's duty to scrutinize
the government's actions and take stands when something wrong happens. When
citizens get too complacent, they will not notice when their freedom is being
cut down.
To put it in a
nutshell, I pen down saying that, a good citizen should pay taxes, exercise his
voting rights, be law abiding, do voluntary work to help the government and
take a stand if anything goes wrong. Blythe Danner has rightly said, “We all
have an obligation as citizens of this earth to leave the world a healthier,
cleaner, and better place for our children and future generations.”
Essay Number 21
Some companies and
organizations require their employees to wear uniform. What are the advantages
and disadvantages of wearing uniform?
Setting a dress code in the
workplace is becoming increasingly common. In the following paragraphs, I
intend to delve into the advantages and disadvantages of wearing uniform at
work.
One of the major benefits of a dress code within the
office is that it establishes an atmosphere of discipline and uniformity. It
ensures that inappropriate or dirty clothing is not worn to work. It is also a
social leveller. If everyone is dressed to the same standard, there will be no
judgements made towards other employees on the basis of their clothes. Having a
uniform also reduces employee confusion: a clear dress code means they don't
have to wonder "what" to wear or whether something would be
appropriate to wear to work.
A dress code is also very important in non-office
environments, such as in factories, for keeping employees safe. For example, if
the employees work around machinery that a tie could get caught in, ties are
not appropriate. The same is true of jewellery, belts, scarves, and long hair.
Therefore, a dress code keeps employees safe from injury and also allows them
to look presentable if clients or visitors come on site. This dress code is
also very beneficial for other places of service, such as fast food, or grocery
stores. It portrays a feeling of cleanliness when you know the staff is wearing
their appropriate uniform, as opposed to if they were wearing their own
clothing.Furthermore, a dress code sets the "tone" of the company.
For example, a law office with all the lawyers and associates wearing suits and
formal business attire is viewed as being professional and able to handle court
cases. How the public perceives a company is important to the type and amount
of business it does.
The disadvantages are that it can become very boring to
wear the same clothes daily. Secondly, the uniform may not be very comfortable
to wear. These disadvantages can, however, be lessened by giving the employees
a say in the choice of uniform.
To put it in a nutshell, I pen down saying that, a dress
code is very essential nowadays in the workplace. The disadvantages are
negligible as compared to the advantages.
Essay Number 22
For some people shopping is
not just about buying what is necessary, but a form of entertainment. Do you
think it is a positive or a negative development? Give your opinion and
examples from your experience.
Shopping is generally thought of in terms of fulfilling
needs. Shopping is seen first as a function and secondarily as something that
serves emotional and social needs. As incomes have grown, choices have exploded
and free time has increased, shopping has become entertainment as much as
anything else. This can be seen as both – a positive as well as a negative
development. In the following paragraphs I intend to explore the pros and cons
of shopping as an entertainment.
On the positive side, shopping satisfies our needs.
Everyone needs the basics of life such as items of food, clothing and shelter.
Apart from that, needs vary from person to person. The things which were considered
the luxuries of yesteryears have become the necessities of today. For example,
the mobile phone has become a must-have for even the lower income group of
people. Many businesses and jobs thrive on the connectivity provided by the
mobile phone and the internet.
Furthermore, shopping has given rise to the consumerist
society of today. This has given employment to many. For instance, people are
working in the manufacturing industries and in the retail sector also. Mega
stores and malls are also having a mushroom growth. What is more, psychologists
claim that the best way to cope with stress or any kind of strong and negative
emotion is to hit the shops and do plenty of shopping. It is called retail
therapy and, according to many, it is guaranteed to boost spirits.
On the negative side, excessive shopping makes us pile up
things in the home which we don’t even need. It also leads to a throw-away
society which is detrimental to the environment. To do shopping, people need a
lot of money and if this money does not come by fair means people resort to
unethical means of getting it which leads to violence and crime in the society.
To put it in a nutshell, I pen down saying that, shopping
is good as long as it is done for need, but when it is done for greed then it
becomes a bane. So we should do shopping only according to our requirement and
then it will be a pleasurable experience also.
Essay Number 23
Young people these days tend to be less polite and
respectful than in the past. Causes and solutions.
It is irrefutable that the modern generation nowadays has
become less considerate and civil than in the earlier times. In this essay, I
intend to explore the possible causes of this situation and suggest some ways
forward.
The most important reason is the disintegration of the
traditional joint family system. In today’s nuclear families, there are no
grandparents to teach moral values to children. Parents are busy working and do
not spend quality time with children. Consequently, children become
self-centred and uncaring for the world around them.Secondly, we are part of a
consumerist society. We desire to have the latest things and to get those
things we are becoming workaholics. We set goals for ourselves and work hard to
achieve them. As a result politeness and respect have taken a back seat.
Finally, we have the influence of the western culture. There, it is considered
quite normal to argue and question the elders.
The solutions are not simple. To begin with, it is
necessary to instil moral values in children at a young age. So, joint family
system should be encouraged. Secondly, community welfare programmes should be
part of high school curriculum. We can also take the help of media to show
programmes which highlight the good points of earlier times and discourage
consumerism. But, the final onus is on the people themselves. They should be
willing to change.
To put it in a nutshell, I pen down saying that, in the
fast-paced world of today, people have changed and become selfish and self
centred, but steps can be taken to re-imbibe some virtues of the olden times.
Essay Number 24
Nowadays for many people the Internet is replacing
regular books. What do you think will happen in the future and what is your
opinion?
Version 1
It is irrefutable that the Internet and the other forms of
e-media have come as a threat to the physical book. My view, however, is that
despite the many threats, the book will remain as strong in the future as it
was in the past.
Many people fear that the book may not survive because of
the many threats it has been facing. Films were an early threat because they
were very effective in telling stories in a visual way. Next, there was the
radio followed by the TV and finally the internet. Surely, there are enough
reasons why the book ought to be dead. But, it is not just alive, it is hale
and hearty.
To further strengthen my point of view, I would like to
segment books in three categories. In the first category are books that deal
with academic curricula of schools and colleges. Students will always need to
buy these books and carry them in their bags to schools and colleges for
learning.
In the second category there are all the types of general
education books like dictionaries, thesauruses and the like. The use of these
books may be affected slightly because of uploading some of their content on
the net. Other books dealing with diverse subjects like history, geography,
cookery and hobbies will hardly be affected in any way. This is evident from
their robust sales at the book counters.
In the third category we have the books dealing with
fiction. These are companions for the traveler as well as the home bird. Their
position can hardly be affected. Added to this the book is such a practical
tool; it doesn’t cost too much; it is usually small enough to carry around and
it can be easily revisited.
To put it in a nutshell, I pen down saying that, despite
the threat of the internet, the book has maintained its place. So I feel we’ll
never go without books because they have served us so well for so long.
Essay Number 25
Nowadays for many people the Internet is replacing
regular books. What do you think will happen in the future and what is your
opinion?
Version 2
The Internet as the mainstream of media plays a very
important role in transferring information. Some people assert that internet
would take the place of books in the future. However, in my opinion, each
medium has its own advantages and disadvantages. Books will always hold a place
in our lives.
Admittedly, internet has made our lives very convenient.
Firstly, it can transform information instantly. It can tell us what happened
in the world right away with very impressive pictures. Secondly, it plays an
important role in education. People can study history, culture, language and
cooking skills from the internet. Even the books are now available in
electronic format (e-books) and that is the reason some people find it a threat
to the traditional, physical, book.
However, we should not neglect the importance of books
which are very convenient to carry and easy to get. Books are available
everywhere, such as in the library, in the book store, in your pocket or beside
the pillow. After a day’s work we can relax in our bed or sofa by reading some
book or magazine. Books are also very good travel companions.Moreover, it is
very difficult to sit for long hours glued to the monitor screen. Eye strain
and back pain are also some disadvantages of the internet. With so many power
cuts, as in my country, we cannot rely on the internet. Last but not least, the
day is not far when all people will be able to afford the internet connection.
To put it in a nutshell, I pen down saying that, despite
the threat of the internet, the book has maintained its place. So I feel we’ll
never go without books because they have served us so well for so long.
Essay Number 26
Today, majority of children are raised by their
grandparents due to the fact that their parents are busy working. To what
extent do you think it affects the whole family?
It is irrefutable that both parents are working nowadays
and as a result children have to be raised by either maids or grandparents.
Definitely, grandparents are better than any other option and this situation
affects the family in both positive and negative ways which I shall highlight
in this essay.
On the positive side, looking after the grandchildren
keeps the grandparents energetic and vibrant. Grandparents bathe, feed and even
read books to the child. This leads to a sort of symbiotic relation in which
both grandparents and grandchildren are benefited. In other words we can say
that it is a win-win situation for both. Grandparents don’t suffer from
loneliness and depression which is very common at that age and children are
also well looked after.
Moreover, such a situation encourages joint family system.
Therefore, all the benefits of a joint family are there. There is security in
the family as we all know that there is security in numbers. Another big
advantage is that grandparents teach moral values to children. If grandparents
do not look after children then parents use TVs as baby-sitters and children
can become couch potatoes.
On the negative side, it is generally seen that
grandparents are over-doting and, out of love, may pamper and spoil the
grandchildren. Another disadvantage is that if there is not enough harmony
between the parents and grandparents then it can lead to frustration and spoil
the whole atmosphere of the house. In such cases children are the worst
sufferers.
To put it in a nutshell, I pen down saying that, it is
very beneficial if grandparents look after their grandchildren. Grandchildren
learn moral values, are looked after well and grandparents enjoy themselves and
don’t suffer from loneliness and depression.
Essay Number 27
In many countries, children are getting fatter and
less fit day by day. Why is it so and suggest solutions.
It is irrefutable that childhood obesity is a burgeoning
problem these days in many parts of the world. In this essay I intend into the
causes of this problem and suggest some ways forward.
The most important reason is unhealthy diet. Children are
attracted to fast food which is rich in sugar and fat. They are ignorant of
what constitutes a healthy diet. Parents nowadays are busy in their work and
are not present to guide their children. To add to it, children are bombarded
with advertisements from fast food companies.
Another important factor is that children are much less
active than they used to be. In the past young people took part in activities
that burned a lot of energy. However, today they spend a lot of their time
indoors, sitting in front of the computers or playing video games. This
sedentary life style is playing havoc with the health of young people.
There are a number of steps that need to be taken to solve
this problem. The first is to educate children about nutrition. Schools should
organize compulsory lessons to explain the main elements of a healthy diet and
teach pupils how to prepare healthy meals. Parents should also cook healthy
delicious meals at home so that children are deterred from eating fast food.
Furthermore, governments should have some restrictions on the type of adverts
shown in children’s programmes. Finally, children should be encouraged to take
part in sports. Schools have a great role to play in this.
To put it in a nutshell, I pen down saying that, childhood
obesity is a serious problem and it should be tackled on a war footing
otherwise the young people of today will have a very unhealthy middle and old
age.
Essay Number 28
India 27th nov. 2010
Scientists believe that computers will become more
intelligent than human beings. Some people find it a positive development while
others think it is negative development. Discuss both points and give your own
opinion.
There are a lot of computer scientists who are convinced
that when computers become many times faster than they are now, and more
complex, they will be more intelligent than human beings. Some take it as a
blessing where as others take it as a curse. In the following paragraphs I
shall discuss both viewpoints and finally give my opinion.
On the positive side, computer machines or robots can do
lots of jobs for human beings and this saves the labour force to be engaged in
other aspects. More and more automated machines have replaced human labour.
Computer manages our banks and the tickets at the airport are issued by
machine-robot. In addition, the robots have entered offices, departments and
houses to help people to work easily and to enjoy longer leisure hours in their
own homes. The computerization certainly relieves human beings from heavy
labours. What is more, robotic surgery is being done to overcome the limitation
of human beings such as trembling of human hands. Microscopic surgeries and eye
operations can be better done with the help of robotic surgeons.
On the downside, if intelligent machine-robots replace
human being’s work then this would cause many to out of work. Unemployment
would further cause a lot of problems. What is more, people would rely too much
on computers and become lethargic which would lead to problems such as obesity.
Finally, robots may dominate our world just like what is shown in our science
fiction movies of today.
I believe that computers hold much more information than
the human brain possibly can, but the collective information that is found
there came from large groups of human brains around the world. Without the
human brains, computers wouldn't be available to gather that information. The
computer only has information if a human being adds to the system. A computer
can think to some extent. You can ask it questions and it will give you an
automated answer. It cannot touch the human brain though. Experience is
sometimes a better answer than the mechanical version of it. Human brains
certainly outweigh computers because computers can't feel. Technology will
never be able to create something that could surpass the incredibly complex and
ever changing human.
In conclusion, Artificial Intelligence has both positive
and negative effects. What we must do is make sure that the positive ones are
encouraged and negative ones are eliminated as far as possible. After all it is
in our hands not to become slaves of our own technology.
Essay Number 29
Small shops in towns and villages are closing and
replaced by big stores. Explain your opinion. Do you think it is good or bad?
Commercialization has grown rapidly in the modern era.
Consequently, there is a mushroom growth of big shopping malls. As every garden
has weeds, this phenomenon also has its pros and cons. On the whole, the
advantages outweigh the disadvantages.
There are many advantages of big stores. To begin with,
they save our time. We do not have to waste time going from one small shop to
the other. Secondly, these stores offer a huge variety of goods. For example,
in some stores you can buy anything ranging from a sewing needle to a car. Furthermore,
such stores purchase items in bulk and so they can afford to sell the products
at a lower price than the other small retailers and therefore the customers are
benefited. To add to it, they sell mostly the branded products and so the
quality is assured. Another advantage is that most of such stores accept credit
cards and so you don’t have to carry heavy chunks of cash.
On the downside, such malls promote consumerism. They pull
the customers through attractive displays and schemes and as a result customers
end up buying more than they need. Moreover, such shops are opened with huge
investments. So they can withstand adverse market conditions for a long time.
Because of this the small retailers and vendors are finding it difficult to
cope with them.
To put it in a nutshell, I pen down saying that big
shopping malls are definitely an asset to the customer and society despite
their drawbacks.
Essay Number 30
Some people say that subjects like arts, music,
drama and creative writing are more beneficial to children and therefore they
need more of these subjects to be included in the timetable. Do you agree or
disagree?
Arts have little or no place in the educational curriculum
so far because we have a feeling that time spent on these things is time
wasted. Recent studies, however, have shown that a good curriculum that
includes arts education can have multiple benefits which I shall highlight in
this essay.
The most important benefit of arts in schools is that it
contributes to making a well rounded student. Not only that, certain forms of
arts instruction enhance and complement academic skills such as basic reading
skills, language development and writing skills. So, children do well in other
subjects also. Another big advantage is that it encourages the pursuit of
extra-curricular activities. Children get a chance to show their creative
expression. When such hidden abilities are exposed in school time then those
with exceptional talent can be encouraged to adopt it as a profession later-on
in life. It is a well known fact that people in such professions are earning
telephone figure salaries nowadays.
Last but not least, such subjects are stress-busters. In
the highly competitive era of today, pressure of academic subjects is too high.
Arts like music, drama and creative writing break the monotony of tough
academic studies.
To put it in a nutshell, I pen down saying that our
educational curriculum needs a serious revision and more of such subjects need
to be added to the school curriculum. They complement academic study, bring out
hidden talent and break the ennui of tough academic studies.
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